Hey Joseph, This is Lupe from Wesley Intermediate. I really like your piece of writing but maybe next time you can re-read it and check some spelling words there. Other then that Great Work Keep it up! :)
Hey Joseph im Phoenix from Owairaka school.Just what Lupe said make sure that you do cheke your spelling or ask three people about your spelling,and check before publishing. Hey how long have you had your chrome book for?
Hi Joseph i really like your piece of writting and to be honest i had the exact same reaction for when i had recieved my chromebook, but just maybe next time you could go back and check your piece of writting for any mistakes like spelling or other things but other then that you did a great job keep it up bro..
This is a good piece of writing.
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Hey Joseph, This is Lupe from Wesley Intermediate. I really like your piece of writing but maybe next time you can re-read it and check some spelling words there. Other then that Great Work Keep it up! :)
ReplyDeleteHey Joseph im Phoenix from Owairaka school.Just what Lupe said make sure that you do cheke your spelling or ask three people about your spelling,and check before publishing.
ReplyDeleteHey how long have you had your chrome book for?
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ReplyDeleteHi Joseph i really like your piece of writting and to be honest i had the exact same reaction for when i had recieved my chromebook, but just maybe next time you could go back and check your piece of writting for any mistakes like spelling or other things but other then that you did a great job keep it up bro..